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Iggy is revising the following excerpt from his research-based essay on the effectiveness of animal shelters

behaviorists studied sheltered animals to determine whether these animals showed increased signs of stress. these clinicians hypothesized that behaviors such as whale eye are much more prevalent in shelter inhabitants.

which revisions should iggy make to best improve the readability for his audience (tenth grade classmates and his teacher)?

a) iggy should include personal perspective of owning a shelter pet.

b) he should combine the sentences to make the text easier to read.

c) he should include extended definitions for more challenging vocabulary.

d) he should include all behaviors of the stressed dogs observed by the clinicians.

the answer is c on edg​

Answer :

ANNYKSLIN

To improve readability Iggy should include extended definitions for a more challenging vocabulary, as shown in option C.

What is textual readability?

  • It is the ease of reading a text.
  • It is the fluidity of the text.
  • It is the way the text presents itself to the reader.

By showing extended definitions, Iggy makes the text more detailed and informative, showing that he was committed to the reader's understanding. He also shows how he knows how to manipulate the language, and present more elaborate sentences and more efficient text.

More information about readability is at the link:

https://brainly.com/question/19540657

Answer:

C

Explanation:

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