1. Revise and edit the paragraph. Ensure that your revision avoids errors related to
sentence structure, such as fragments, run-on sentences, and comma splices.
Underline, circle, or otherwise point out the areas where you made corrections.
Although Jack London gained fame with his vivid short stories,
establishing himself as a master of the short form. His best-
known work is a novel. The name of the novel is The Call of the
Wild, it is required reading in many classrooms.
Although Jack London gained fame with his vivid short stories, establishing himself as a master of the short form, his best-known work is a novel named The Call of the Wild. This novel is required reading in many classrooms.
